Magazine advert feedback

Feedback:

I have asked 5 people for feedback on my magazine advert design; in hope for some advantages and areas in which I could improve upon. 

Question 1: What do you like most about the image/advertisement?

Person 1- 'The use of bold colours. I think that It makes the advert stand out more'.

Person 2- 'I really like how she's holding the baseball bat because It makes the artist and her music look intriguing'.

Person 3-  'Her outfit because she looks cool and trendy'.

Person 4- 'How the artist's name is eye-catching and clear as this is useful for the audience to know'.

Person 5- ' What I like the most is how the album's name is on the baseball bat'.

Question 2: Do you feel that this advert is informative enough?

Person 1- ' I think so, yes. Because it tells you when and how you can purchase the album'.

Person 2- ' Definitely. It tells you all you need to know'. 

Person 3- ' In terms of the genre, yes, I feel this is well advertised by her appearance.'

Person 4- ' Yh because it tells you that it's a new album and where you can buy it from'. 

Person 5- ' I'd say so. Yh'. 

Question 3: Is there anything that you feel could be improved upon?

Person 1- ' Not really. Maybe you could just mention some of the songs featured somewhere'.

Person 2- ' No. I can't really fault it!'.

Person 3- 'Hmm, perhaps you could make the text slightly bigger on the baseball bat so that it's easier to read'.

Person 4- ' I can't think of anything. It's good'.

Person 5- ' I'd say you could maybe include one of the songs that's on it. Just incase someone recognises/likes the song and then thinks they might like the rest of the artist's work'. 

After collecting my feedback, I have taken every response into consideration and I am very pleased with the responses that I have had. Majority of the people I have asked liked the advert and how the artist was presented, and they also felt that the advertisement provided the right amount of information, so that the audience was aware about how/where/when the album could be purchased. The feedback for the third question has made me aware that I could perhaps mention somewhere on the album about some of the songs that are featured. I feel this would be a good idea in terms of the advert being successful at being informative.